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k ([personal profile] riots) wrote2012-12-28 11:09 pm

fic advent: day eleven

for [livejournal.com profile] paradisist
kai/luhan
pg, 1.3k words
prompt was this picture. au, kai is coincidence, luhan is fate



As jobs go, Jongin supposes it isn't that bad. He kinda has to spend a lot of time with people, but he's mostly on the outside. He gets to watch, waiting for just the right moment to make his move. There aren't a whole lot of rules, and he gets to work on the fly, choosing whose lives to change, who to steer wherever he pleases. And of course, there's nothing like the feeling of choosing exactly right, of setting someone's life on the right path, just because of one single moment. It feels good.

Like right now. Jongin has been watching this guy for a couple of weeks now. He'd bumped into the man in an elevator, but it'd been the man who'd apologized to him, quickly and profusely, and flashed Jongin a lopsided smile. There had been something sad there, and it stuck with Jongin, itching at the back of his mind until he found himself slipping into the shadows and trailing after him.

His name is Joonmyun. He's small, fine-boned, with a thousand watt smile that he turns on everyone and everything, from the girl who serves him coffee to his neighbour in the next cubicle. Jongin finds that he's unfailingly polite, never misses a deadline, and when his boss piles the paperwork up on his desk, he never complains.

He seems to live a very small life. He gets along tolerably well with a couple of coworkers, but his only close friend is a busy lawyer with a sharp tongue and a smile like a cat, and from what Jongin can see, he's got atrocious luck in the romance department. Joonmyun goes home to an empty apartment and a little dog, and it makes Jongin sad. He seems to be a nice guy. He deserves a little something more.

After a week, Jongin thinks he's got it. There's a freakishly tall, model handsome type working the floor above Joonmyun, in HR. He likes his men short and sweet and Jongin is certain it's a perfect match. Time to get to work.

He drifts through Joonmyun's building, stealing the coffee off someone's desk as he makes his way to the tall man's office. He drags his fingers across the nameplate ('Yifan', Jongin reads) and it only takes a nudge before Yifan straightens. Jongin's touch has stirred something in his head, an idea coalescing. He has some paperwork he needs to take to accounting. Yifan could, of course, just get someone else to do it, but maybe today he wants the walk.

Jongin follows Yifan as he makes his way downstairs, heading right for senior accountant Kim Joonmyun's desk. Another job well done, he thinks to himself, pleased.

It seems he spoke too soon, though. Just as Yifan reaches Joonmyun's desk, a courier does too. He deposits an enormous flower bouquet and hands over the card and Yifan makes a detour to Joonmyun's neighbour, not wanting to intrude.

Jongin's shoulders slump, and he opens his mouth and then closes it, uselessly. Joonmyun is beaming down at the little card, his smile more wide and genuine than Jongin has ever seen it, but still, irritation prickles at the back of Jongin's neck. It was perfect. What went wrong?

“So slow.” The voice at his ear is lilting, teasing, and Jongin turns to see Lu Han, grinning at him, wide and smug. “That's the best you can do?”

Jongin bristles. “Goddamnit, Lu Han.” Of course. Lu Han and his stupid intricate little plans.

Lu Han shrugs a shoulder, nonchalant. “He and Jongdae have known each other since they were kids. I set them on this path long ago.” He pats Jongin's elbow. “I just beat you to it.” The pleased curve to Lu Han's eyes is driving Jongin nuts, and making his stomach shift unpleasantly. Every time Lu Han shows up, he has this effect on Jongin, setting him off balance. For someone who is supposed to be the embodiment of the slow, inexorable, and inevitable, Lu Han seems to do everything in his power to knock Jongin off his footing.

In front of them, Joonmyun is turning the little card over in his hands and admiring his flowers, and next to him, Yifan is flustered and tongue-tied by the brash, boyish accountant he's speaking to. Jongin wonders if this, the way the girl looks up at Yifan and grins, if this is Lu Han's work, but he suddenly has no desire to know.

Lu Han has been beating him to the punch every single time lately, and it's starting to drive Jongin up the wall. First, it was pretty Baekhyun and that styling job (Jongin was pushing his tall, gangly boyfriend to suggest it, but thanks to Lu Han Baekhyun had seen the ad all on his own), then it was Zitao (and that one stung, Jongin had almost gotten him published, and then Lu Han had to go and nudge him towards a job in the United States). And now this! It's getting ridiculous.

“Go away,” Jongin grumbles. “You ruin everything.” He's getting tired of these near misses, of never quite getting to save the day, and he's even more sick of Lu Han always popping up. Always with that pleased smile, and always making Jongin's heart rattle around in his ribs. He hates him.

“Well,” Lu Han says. “Not everything, clearly. I seem to be doing pretty well down here.”

Jongin watches Joonmyun toy with a flower petal and glowers. “Whatever,” he says. He needs to find another posting. Can you get another job when you're the physical embodiment of an intangible concept? Jongin sure hopes so.

He sets down his stolen coffee mug and turns to leave, but Lu Han catches his arm. When he turns to look at him, Lu Han looks genuinely contrite. It makes Jongin pause, his irritation burning down to a slow simmer. “Sorry,” Lu Han says, and Jongin bites his lip, searching his face. He can't decide if Lu Han is being honest, but part of him tells him he is. “I didn't mean to steal your thunder.”

“Again,” Jongin points out, sullen.

“Again,” Lu Han agrees.

Jongin would like to say that he's strong in the face of Lu Han, but he's so not. Lu Han hasn't taken his hand away from Jongin's arm, fingers curled warmly around his elbow, and he looks earnest, and it's doing stupid things to Jongin's stomach. “'s fine,” he says finally, clearing his throat.

“This one was mostly an accident,” Lu Han admits. “You were unlucky.”

Jongin eyes him warily. “And the rest?”

Lu Han shrugs a shoulder. “Well. I had to get your attention somehow, didn't I?”

“What?” Jongin chokes out. His breath catches in his throat and he blinks at Lu Han, eyes wide. “I. You did this on purpose?”

The flush that spreads across Lu Han's cheeks is simultaneously gratifying and a little bit scary. “Well, yes.” He tips his head. “You didn't really think it was all an accident, did you?”

“I, uh.” Jongin's words don't really seem to want to come out. “I am Coincidence, you know.”

“Yes,” Lu Han agrees. He takes a step forward and Jongin shivers. “And I'm Fate.” His lips are so close to Jongin's and it makes him swallow, hard. He doesn't step away, though. “I've always got a plan.”

Jongin lets him close the distance between them, Lu Han's hand coming up to cup his chin and hold him steady, and well, maybe Jongin can get behind this whole grand plan thing.


[identity profile] noble-arodwen.livejournal.com 2012-12-29 04:20 am (UTC)(link)
/plants monster ass in spot/

[identity profile] noble-arodwen.livejournal.com 2012-12-29 04:34 am (UTC)(link)
Joonmyun goes home to an empty apartment and a little dog, and it makes Jongin sad. He seems to be a nice guy. He deserves a little something more.

Joonie deserves everything tbh so can he have kris, too

[identity profile] loudestoflove.livejournal.com 2012-12-30 07:39 am (UTC)(link)
he does!! all the happy endings for joonmyun. thank you for reading!!

[identity profile] seulpeo.livejournal.com 2012-12-29 04:21 am (UTC)(link)
OH MY G OD KENDRA THIS IS INCREDIBLE
just, how you took the prompt and created a conflict out of it and (i just secretly really like lukai) (and jundae) but screams this was so excellent and creative and beautiful i love it so much. especially how coincidence and fate work against each other and fate is always always there because luhan is setting this up in the end too aaaaaaaaaaa

Every time Lu Han shows up, he has this effect on Jongin, setting him off balance. For someone who is supposed to be the embodiment of the slow, inexorable, and inevitable, Lu Han seems to do everything in his power to knock Jongin off his footing.
i just. incredible.

[identity profile] loudestoflove.livejournal.com 2012-12-30 07:49 am (UTC)(link)
i rly loved the prompt, and it was the first thing that came to mind!! i'm so glad you liked it though, it turns out lukai is rly fun to write?? WHO KNEW thank you bb ♥

[identity profile] starrymoons.livejournal.com 2012-12-29 04:50 am (UTC)(link)
this was cute and butthurt jongin + smug luhan is my fave because jongin's like >:| and then luhan's like lol i did it on purpose
(but the question is which one is coincidence and which one is fate in the pic prompt)

[identity profile] loudestoflove.livejournal.com 2012-12-30 07:49 am (UTC)(link)
i pictured them as lu han as the one in the dress and jongin in the suit!! thank you!!

[identity profile] airplanewishes.livejournal.com 2012-12-29 04:34 pm (UTC)(link)
Omg you actually wrote this. Finally someone did and it's you and you did it in such a pretty way. I love this!! ♥

[identity profile] loudestoflove.livejournal.com 2012-12-30 07:49 am (UTC)(link)
i did!! thank youuuuuuu

[identity profile] paradisist.livejournal.com 2012-12-30 04:54 am (UTC)(link)
This is madness

The prompt I gave was kind of hard (because I found it so cool and really wanted someone to write a fic about that) and yes you wrote it and I am elated!!!

And then I read it and I feel so kicked right now. THIS IS TOO
CLEVER IT'S ALL I EVER WANTED FOR THIS PIC PROMPT. I love how you described fate and coincidence and the way you made it romantic was really too clever. Thank you so much for writing this! <3

(also I will be working on your happy!chanyeol fic soon but I'm so slow;; but I will pull through because how can I ever thank you enough for this;;)

<3

[identity profile] paradisist.livejournal.com 2012-12-30 04:57 am (UTC)(link)
Also, matchmaking? That was a stroke of genius because that's how Fate and Coincidence work, isn't it? Bump into someone a few times, get to know each other and leave the rest to fate to handle, because fate is concrete and in a way kind of a plan? I am still gushing over how crazily great this idea is, and you finished it in a neat 1.3k. Please write more and you are the best for writing this for me.

<3

[identity profile] loudestoflove.livejournal.com 2012-12-30 07:53 am (UTC)(link)
i was the first thing i thought of, tbh, bc i find that when people debate fate vs coincidence, a lot of it centres around romance/love!! (or death/accidents but dnw). it was a great prompt and i'm really pleased with how it turned out, so thank you for that!!

[identity profile] loudestoflove.livejournal.com 2012-12-30 07:51 am (UTC)(link)
it was such a nice prompt though!! i rly enjoyed writing it and i'm glad that you liked it!! also glad you asked for it to be kai-centric, bc i like to make his life hard. thank you!!

(and dw about that!! this is a no strings attached christmas gift so don't feel obligated ♥)

[identity profile] acornmama.livejournal.com 2012-12-31 12:14 pm (UTC)(link)
Grand plans are apparently good things!

[identity profile] loudestoflove.livejournal.com 2013-01-01 07:20 pm (UTC)(link)
especially if they end with making out. thank you so much!!

[identity profile] miyunnie.livejournal.com 2013-01-01 02:36 am (UTC)(link)
this is too cute!
and very well written, I enjoyed reading it!~

[identity profile] loudestoflove.livejournal.com 2013-01-01 07:20 pm (UTC)(link)
thank you so much!!

[identity profile] metrekone.livejournal.com 2013-01-01 10:36 am (UTC)(link)
really great spin on a really interesting plot. I like Jongin and Luhan's personification of Coincidence and Fate. And I like the two together oh yes ;~;

[identity profile] loudestoflove.livejournal.com 2013-01-01 07:21 pm (UTC)(link)
it was such a nice prompt, i'm just glad i managed to make something nice of it. thank you so much!!

[identity profile] fechan-news.livejournal.com 2013-01-01 11:50 am (UTC)(link)
Wow, i like it :D
thanks for making Kailu fic... it's cute.. i love how Luhan ways to get Kai's attention ; )
Good job! (^^)b

[identity profile] loudestoflove.livejournal.com 2013-01-01 07:21 pm (UTC)(link)
i've never written them before, but it turns out i kind of love them. thank you so much!!

(Anonymous) 2013-01-02 11:45 am (UTC)(link)
SCREAMING

OMG

/worships

I AM SMILING INSANELY

[identity profile] loudestoflove.livejournal.com 2013-01-05 10:00 pm (UTC)(link)
there is no need for worship, but thank you so much!! i am glad i could make you smile
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[identity profile] haepearl092091.livejournal.com 2013-01-04 06:06 pm (UTC)(link)
omfg how do you awesome hcjnbcdekk jnbcdekk
dear authornim, can i marry this? jbghjjnbvd so cute and beautiful and my lukai feels helP

[identity profile] loudestoflove.livejournal.com 2013-01-05 10:01 pm (UTC)(link)
hahaha thank you so much!! marriage is btwn you and the fic so you will have to ask it. thank you for reading!!
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[identity profile] haepearl092091.livejournal.com 2013-01-06 12:08 pm (UTC)(link)
but you are the /parent/ LOL

[identity profile] byakuya-777.livejournal.com 2013-02-21 08:21 pm (UTC)(link)
AWWWWW THIS IS BEAUTIFUL!!!!!
I´m in love with this story; the characterization, the plot, the way is written, everything!!!!

[identity profile] loudestoflove.livejournal.com 2013-02-22 12:02 am (UTC)(link)
thank you so so much!! ♥♥

[identity profile] tokyo-freak.livejournal.com 2013-06-22 11:53 pm (UTC)(link)
Hi omg! I stumbled on this fic because the plot was interesting and i'm glad i did <3 it's such a refreshing read since it stands out among common plots so effortlessly! I made a graphic (http://kyungfucius.tumblr.com/post/53615238405) out of it bb ♥

[identity profile] loudestoflove.livejournal.com 2013-06-23 12:04 am (UTC)(link)
oh my gosh thank you!! i'm so flattered, thank you so much!! n____n

[identity profile] rathenal.livejournal.com 2013-06-23 03:19 am (UTC)(link)
Ah, I'm so late on commenting, but I hope you'll appreciate it nonetheless :) This was so cute and creative and just made me smile :) Such a cool concept you got to work with!! Coincidence and Fate coming together... so cute!

[identity profile] loudestoflove.livejournal.com 2013-06-23 03:24 am (UTC)(link)
i appreciate all my comments!! i rly liked the prompts that i got for fic advent, they forced me to work a little harder on things. i'm glad you liked it, thank you so much!!

[identity profile] rathenal.livejournal.com 2013-06-23 04:08 am (UTC)(link)
You are so welcome! :)