homygod. ok. I want to write a proper comment because I absolutely adored every single word of this. I really, really liked what you did here with the relationships between them. How Myungsoo is a but unused to how the things work down here and has to go little by little, but then there's Dongwoo getting to him just little by little too, and the amazing thing is that despite the fact that you already know that there's something supernatural going on in there, I forgot because as I reader I was much more engrossed in the relationship developing between them. Dongwoo was just brilliant in the beginning (and, let's be honest, overall; he was just brilliant), just being so normal and getting to him little by little. I loved all that because it looked as if Myungsoo was getting a normal life, and it was just sweet and really well done. And how he thinks he can read Dongwoo completely, and you believe him, and then bam! no, lol, Myungsoo, you have no idea.
And Hoya. And Hoya's introduction. I think you portrayed all the members really well, honestly. Dongwoo moving between the hunter and the really nice guy we know, Myungsoo's personality, and Hoya being the most "agressive" one when it comes to get to Myungsoo, with his feral smiles and sudden moves. (Even the four, they don't appear much but I think they are just on point.) I'd say he was my favourite thing off this fic because I fell for this Hoya right away, there's something really attractive about his attitude, but I don't think I can choose a favourite thing from this fic. I also have to say that you're one of the few writers that I have read that can perfectly portray the threesome (idk if there's another word for it?) without it looking out of place or leaving someone behind. And I don't mean just the sex (which was amazing and got me regretting started reading this with more people in the room), I mean the dynamics between them, how Hoya and Dongwoo DO seem an item but at the same time they never leave Myungsoo alone or make him feel like he's the third wheel. Idk, you know this better than me because you've writen it, but the whole way you've managed the relationship between the three is just amazing, and I thought you should know.
And I'm going to end saying the last thing I loved, and is that they never scared him into doing it. They seduced him (they also seduce the reader, because it felt like falling from grace with Myungsoo during the whole thing) and come clean and just make him wonder if there's something better than what he had. It's perfect, you did it so realistically that by the end of it everything makes perfect sense, they just work, and you know, you can totally understand why Myungsoo made that choice.
Loved the scene in front of the mirror with Hoya and Myungsoo. Loved the Hoya/Myungsoo interactions in general but that scene was just really good, Myungsoo being curious and Hoya understanding, and HOMYGOD, this comment is so damn long (I just realized, yes), but what I wanted to tell you is basically that this was fantastic and just became one of my favourite fics (and jsyk I'm actually bookmarking this in my delicious account under the tag "favourites").
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And Hoya. And Hoya's introduction. I think you portrayed all the members really well, honestly. Dongwoo moving between the hunter and the really nice guy we know, Myungsoo's personality, and Hoya being the most "agressive" one when it comes to get to Myungsoo, with his feral smiles and sudden moves. (Even the four, they don't appear much but I think they are just on point.) I'd say he was my favourite thing off this fic because I fell for this Hoya right away, there's something really attractive about his attitude, but I don't think I can choose a favourite thing from this fic. I also have to say that you're one of the few writers that I have read that can perfectly portray the threesome (idk if there's another word for it?) without it looking out of place or leaving someone behind. And I don't mean just the sex (which was amazing and got me regretting started reading this with more people in the room), I mean the dynamics between them, how Hoya and Dongwoo DO seem an item but at the same time they never leave Myungsoo alone or make him feel like he's the third wheel. Idk, you know this better than me because you've writen it, but the whole way you've managed the relationship between the three is just amazing, and I thought you should know.
And I'm going to end saying the last thing I loved, and is that they never scared him into doing it. They seduced him (they also seduce the reader, because it felt like falling from grace with Myungsoo during the whole thing) and come clean and just make him wonder if there's something better than what he had. It's perfect, you did it so realistically that by the end of it everything makes perfect sense, they just work, and you know, you can totally understand why Myungsoo made that choice.
Loved the scene in front of the mirror with Hoya and Myungsoo. Loved the Hoya/Myungsoo interactions in general but that scene was just really good, Myungsoo being curious and Hoya understanding, and HOMYGOD, this comment is so damn long (I just realized, yes), but what I wanted to tell you is basically that this was fantastic and just became one of my favourite fics (and jsyk I'm actually bookmarking this in my delicious account under the tag "favourites").
It was fantastic ♥