http://xdenisex.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] xdenisex.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] riots 2013-02-21 11:12 pm (UTC)

so i read this at like 3 in the morning last night and i had so many thoughts but i hAD TO GO TO SLEEP so i couldnt comment and now here i am and i feel like i forgot everything that i was going to say omg

your myungsoo is SO sweet and adorable omg an angel and with his vegetable garden i just ajfklsgd ;;

i really love hoya and dongwoo's closeness? like, i'm not a huge fan of reading yadong or anything, but you wrote them so perfectly that i want to read MORE OF THAT

When Dongwoo steals a quick open-mouthed kiss from Hoya over Myungsoo's shoulder, Myungsoo decides to blame the alcohol for how he doesn't look away.

i love this image more than i should

omg and dongwoo and hoya being demons like i thought they were just idk normal guys that can sense angels or something but CRAP I FREAKING LOVE THAT SHIT OK LIKE with the black eyes showing after blinking, i've always loved that since supernatural and dongwoo and hoya with the black eyes i OTL

i loved the little details you made in the smut scene. like Dongwoo cups Myungsoo's face in his hands, and he tries to kiss him. He's grinning too widely, though and Their kiss is so easy and sweet and when Hoya tries to pull away, Dongwoo catches his bottom lip between his teeth. and “He likes it when you pull,” Dongwoo tells him. and He watches Hoya work a finger into Dongwoo, watches the way Hoya turns to press a kiss to the inside of Dongwoo's knee, watches how Dongwoo lays back with his eyes closed, his trust in Hoya so complete. Myungsoo curls a hand around his dick and when Hoya glances back at him, he grins in approval. (talk about biggest kink EVER) and wow im going to stop now

and i love (im saying that too much but its TRUE) the scene where myungsoo sees his eyes(???) and, like in usual demon/angel fics i see a lot of TRIAL AND WHOLE HUGE EXPLOSION YOU ARE NOW A DEMON and that simplicity was really sweet ;;

myungsoo at the end omg pERFECT

AND SUNGJONG JESUS CHRIST I LIKE SQEALED WHEN I READ THAT A FOURSOME I REALLY WANT TO READ THAT

this comment is really freaking long i think im finished and yes i am memming the hell out of this

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