OH MY GOD, I AM REALLY CRYING Why did it endddddd, oh now I'm just a mess, a MESS.
I promised I would come back with a coherent reply but I'm sorry, allow me to break that promise-- just this once.
This fic, like everyone has commented and told you, is just utterly, perfectly well put together. The characterization? Are you kidding me? Fucking intense and so perfect, I could dedicate this whole comment to it if I could but sadly, I have classes tomorrow (and reality is, I don't know how could I even do that without repeating myself through it).
The dialogue is so natural, it's perfect to imagine and doesn't distract the reader from the plot; It was does the opposite, it adds to it. Which, really, is the main purpose of dialogue.
The way you wrote it...your writing style: it's vivid, clear and it really just sucked me in. I'm here, on a chilly stormy Sunday night, reading this and I couldn't tear my eyes away. The weather adds a certain mood to the fic, especially when you made it transition from summer to fall.
That's also something great-- the symbolism. Summer: Everything is innocent and playful, awkward at some points but sweet and soft at most. Then fall comes and the mood shifts. The atmosphere isn't the same and things begin getting risky, awkwardness quickly changing to high tension. It's a sort of a cliche, but nevertheless, it's still perfect. You excuted it so well.
Another one is the transition from the Cafe to the club. The cafe represents who Myungsoo was and the club symbolizes who he ends up to be. The fic ends with him in the club so it's known that there is absolutely no turning back for his character.
(I can't help to write my own intrepretations, sorry.)
Just, god. I mean like, that's all I'm gonna say right now because honestly, I want to say so much more but yet I don't want to leave such a long comment either (Too late).
My favorite part though (That made me absolutely cry out at 1 o' clock in the morning):
Hoya reaches out to cup Myungsoo's jaw, eyes steady on Myungsoo's. “Such a good boy,” he teases, and he doesn't let his hand fall until Myungsoo swallows hard and looks away.
I imagined that so perfectly because you wrote it so perfectly.
And on last thing: the ending. That made me literally stand up from my chair and tell Sungjong to run, oh my god.
So overall, if any of this made sense, this is perhaps the best story that I have read in the infinte fandom. And I'm not just saying that only out of your creativity, your writing style or the pairing. It's ALL of that.
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Why did it endddddd, oh now I'm just a mess, a MESS.
I promised I would come back with a coherent reply but I'm sorry, allow me to break that promise-- just this once.
This fic, like everyone has commented and told you, is just utterly, perfectly well put together. The characterization? Are you kidding me? Fucking intense and so perfect, I could dedicate this whole comment to it if I could but sadly, I have classes tomorrow (and reality is, I don't know how could I even do that without repeating myself through it).
The dialogue is so natural, it's perfect to imagine and doesn't distract the reader from the plot; It was does the opposite, it adds to it. Which, really, is the main purpose of dialogue.
The way you wrote it...your writing style: it's vivid, clear and it really just sucked me in. I'm here, on a chilly stormy Sunday night, reading this and I couldn't tear my eyes away. The weather adds a certain mood to the fic, especially when you made it transition from summer to fall.
That's also something great-- the symbolism. Summer: Everything is innocent and playful, awkward at some points but sweet and soft at most. Then fall comes and the mood shifts. The atmosphere isn't the same and things begin getting risky, awkwardness quickly changing to high tension. It's a sort of a cliche, but nevertheless, it's still perfect. You excuted it so well.
Another one is the transition from the Cafe to the club. The cafe represents who Myungsoo was and the club symbolizes who he ends up to be. The fic ends with him in the club so it's known that there is absolutely no turning back for his character.
(I can't help to write my own intrepretations, sorry.)
Just, god. I mean like, that's all I'm gonna say right now because honestly, I want to say so much more but yet I don't want to leave such a long comment either (Too late).
My favorite part though (That made me absolutely cry out at 1 o' clock in the morning):
Hoya reaches out to cup Myungsoo's jaw, eyes steady on Myungsoo's. “Such a good boy,” he teases, and he doesn't let his hand fall until Myungsoo swallows hard and looks away.
I imagined that so perfectly because you wrote it so perfectly.
And on last thing: the ending. That made me literally stand up from my chair and tell Sungjong to run, oh my god.
So overall, if any of this made sense, this is perhaps the best story that I have read in the infinte fandom. And I'm not just saying that only out of your creativity, your writing style or the pairing. It's ALL of that.
Great, great, great, great JOB!