Wow. I don't even know where to begin with this. How about to tell you i've literally just created this account so i could comment on here to tell you what a fucking amazing story you've written. I've actually been wanting to comment on your stuff for a while, cause i've read your other Jackbum stories and i am just beyond amazed, and grateful too for that matter. Jackbum is easily #1 on my list of otps. They fit together like perfect pieces of a puzzle. They compliment each others strengths and flaws in ways that i can't even begin to describe. They're like you said, the golden otp. And this story, i literally have no words i can formulate that will do justice to describe how beautifully written this is. Every aspect from plot line, to character development to setting is just executed perfectly and gahhh i could just sit here all day and tell you all the great things you've done here. I went through 33k words in one sitting and i might just go for another round. Please never get discouraged to write because you have a gift. This is truly wonderful, and well i don't know you personally to know if you want to pursue a career in writing, with a few tweaks here and there you could actually create something great and who knows maybe become and editor or a writer or anything really. Also, please grace us with more wonderful Jackbum ficlets in the future because they are so underrated and i feel so deprived from the ship that makes me loose my mind. :)