F*ck me what did I just read. Wow, I'm so mind-blown I need a moment. You're one of the reasons I ship Jackbum as hard as I do lolol (I usually ship markson the hardest, but as it was here, brotp, man. I loved that, too. Their friendship is so great.)
I've read your other Jackbum fanfics, too, but I think I never left a comment (man. There's too much I wanna comment on and I know I can't write it down the way I'd like to and this comment will be pretty much lacking bc I just. Yeah.) Imo, your characterization is so spotless, like. I could totally see this all happening in my head. You captured their personalities so well, even the other memeber's personalities. I love the best friends thing between Mark and Jackson and I had even a little heartache when, at the beginning, Mark had problems with the wolf!Jackson. :( The development was great! I mean, yeah, 33k, that's quite a bit. I had the feeling that I needed to read more between the lines than I was able to. :( I guess, I need to read it again to pick up on everything.
The Jackbum. Yes. Omg. I love it. I love how Jaebum's scent has such an impact on Jackson that it calms him and soothes him and makes him feel more at home than his home! Wow. The whole emotional level, the way Jackson is struggeling with what is happening to himself and what he's feeling, but, at the same time, is always so hyper aware and considerate of what Jaebum (might) think and feel and. Yes. I just. Their relationship is on a whole different level through the imprinting and it's always this weight of forever that seems to put a damper on everything, like, Jackson is so super careful and afraid to lose Jaebum. It's so heart-wrenching (okay, maybe I'm getting a little too dramatic, but man, I just love what your writing did to my own emotions) And then those loving moments and always those kisses, all tender, but also passionate. God, I love the scene where Jaebum backs him up into the bathroom and how it becomes clear just how much they depend on each other.
Also, your writing style! Wow. Your humor is flawless, I love it. I laughed a few times out loud in between, even when it was like, 3am or something. xD The dialogues and the teasing and comebacks and just everything, I totally dig(ged) it. 8)
Hm, I think I haven't said much about the plot yet... I personally liked how you didn't elaborate on possible side stories (like that call Jaebum received and had him down all day), but that you stuck to the storyline and only included what was relevant for the development of the plot as well as their relationship and characters. Sometimes, there are stories where you don't know what to focus on, because there's too much going on, but you did a great job guiding the reader along and providing all the important information. I don't know if I expressed that right just now, but I really like it~ I also like the thing with Hyeri, haha~ She brought some kind of different bubbliness and light-heartedness in this story. And the jealousy of Sojin and Jaebum was really adorable, too, for some reason. :D
Okay, I don't really know what to write anymore. :( Uhm... I hope you won't stop writing Jackbum, because, seriously, I love every bit of this story and I was so hooked til the end. (Oh, and, unnecessary side note; I absolutely love the idea of Jackson getting a tattoo ;;;;) Yeah, uhm... I love this, I love you, and I hope you have a nice day lololol :D
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Wow, I'm so mind-blown I need a moment.
You're one of the reasons I ship Jackbum as hard as I do lolol (I usually ship markson the hardest, but as it was here, brotp, man. I loved that, too. Their friendship is so great.)
I've read your other Jackbum fanfics, too, but I think I never left a comment (man. There's too much I wanna comment on and I know I can't write it down the way I'd like to and this comment will be pretty much lacking bc I just. Yeah.)
Imo, your characterization is so spotless, like. I could totally see this all happening in my head. You captured their personalities so well, even the other memeber's personalities. I love the best friends thing between Mark and Jackson and I had even a little heartache when, at the beginning, Mark had problems with the wolf!Jackson. :(
The development was great! I mean, yeah, 33k, that's quite a bit. I had the feeling that I needed to read more between the lines than I was able to. :( I guess, I need to read it again to pick up on everything.
The Jackbum. Yes. Omg. I love it. I love how Jaebum's scent has such an impact on Jackson that it calms him and soothes him and makes him feel more at home than his home! Wow. The whole emotional level, the way Jackson is struggeling with what is happening to himself and what he's feeling, but, at the same time, is always so hyper aware and considerate of what Jaebum (might) think and feel and. Yes. I just. Their relationship is on a whole different level through the imprinting and it's always this weight of forever that seems to put a damper on everything, like, Jackson is so super careful and afraid to lose Jaebum. It's so heart-wrenching (okay, maybe I'm getting a little too dramatic, but man, I just love what your writing did to my own emotions)
And then those loving moments and always those kisses, all tender, but also passionate. God, I love the scene where Jaebum backs him up into the bathroom and how it becomes clear just how much they depend on each other.
Also, your writing style! Wow. Your humor is flawless, I love it. I laughed a few times out loud in between, even when it was like, 3am or something. xD The dialogues and the teasing and comebacks and just everything, I totally dig(ged) it. 8)
Hm, I think I haven't said much about the plot yet... I personally liked how you didn't elaborate on possible side stories (like that call Jaebum received and had him down all day), but that you stuck to the storyline and only included what was relevant for the development of the plot as well as their relationship and characters. Sometimes, there are stories where you don't know what to focus on, because there's too much going on, but you did a great job guiding the reader along and providing all the important information. I don't know if I expressed that right just now, but I really like it~
I also like the thing with Hyeri, haha~ She brought some kind of different bubbliness and light-heartedness in this story. And the jealousy of Sojin and Jaebum was really adorable, too, for some reason. :D
Okay, I don't really know what to write anymore. :( Uhm... I hope you won't stop writing Jackbum, because, seriously, I love every bit of this story and I was so hooked til the end. (Oh, and, unnecessary side note; I absolutely love the idea of Jackson getting a tattoo ;;;;)
Yeah, uhm... I love this, I love you, and I hope you have a nice day lololol :D