Yoooooooooooooooooooo. First of all, agreeing with every other comment here that your Jackson is great. All the little details about him, like remembering to fart of Mark's pillow (ew, but hilarious and so, so Jackson) and exchanging insults with Eric Nam are just... they make him so much more in-character. Also, your JB is so- perfect in that he's sort of cold, kind of awkward, and totally someone I can see JB being a few years down the line, since this is presumably set in the future. And urgh, urgh, urgh, the group dynamics are so good. Is that a bit of MarkJin I spot in there? Loving all the little moments each of the other members got; they felt spot on even with their little screen(page? word?)time.
By the way, let me express again how happy I am that you're writing Got7. I love everything about your writing, but your characterization really takes the cake in bringing your fanfics to another level above others. Just. Yeah.
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First of all, agreeing with every other comment here that your Jackson is great. All the little details about him, like remembering to fart of Mark's pillow (ew, but hilarious and so, so Jackson) and exchanging insults with Eric Nam are just... they make him so much more in-character. Also, your JB is so- perfect in that he's sort of cold, kind of awkward, and totally someone I can see JB being a few years down the line, since this is presumably set in the future.
And urgh, urgh, urgh, the group dynamics are so good. Is that a bit of MarkJin I spot in there? Loving all the little moments each of the other members got; they felt spot on even with their little screen(page? word?)time.
By the way, let me express again how happy I am that you're writing Got7. I love everything about your writing, but your characterization really takes the cake in bringing your fanfics to another level above others. Just. Yeah.