I THOUGHT I HAD A DW ACCOUNT BUT I DIDN'T AND HERE WE ARE. ALL FOR YOU AND OTP.
really i just want to scream incoherently at you rn because this is so great and lerfect. and omg i've never commented on anything of yours before so please brace yourself (because i ramble and talk in runon sentences and it's horrible). wow where to start??? ok your jackson voice is so superb and on point. half the tine i was reading his lines and could hear his voice in my head. and yeah your love for him really shines through in your writing :3 but you made him so much fun to read and ugh ugh. jackson wang, light of my life. AND JAEBUM. he was so... jaebum. one of my favorite things was the line you included of jaebum helping yugyeom out of the van and i was just *__* leader im *__* and his struggle to find out jackson's crush and omg i was just /o\ at him thinking jackson liked someone (that wasn't his perfect ass) and trying to figure out and just ughhh yeah. BUT YOU GET THE JACKBUM?JAESON? (both suck) DYNAMIC SO GOOD AND ALL THE GOLD STARS FOR YOU!!!!! and zjslsjsl at things like jackson noticing jaebum's dark circles and jaebum trying so hard to get jackson to open up.
“That girl you were describing, she sounds a lot like -” I SCREECHED LMAO. and everyone jumping into action so he wouldn't drop the secret and omg jaebum pls (did he just not fet bc he didn't think jackson would like /him/ or...????)
THEN ONLY IN A TOWEL JAEBUM GOING AFTER JACKSON LIKE NOOOOOOO. NIPPLES??? idk which is more unf, jackson distracted by that body or jaebum turning pink.
THE KINDA CONFESSION SCENE? JACKSON SAYING HE WANTS TO LICK THE GLOSS OFF JB'S LIPS LIKE YOOOOO. AND JACKSON BLURTING EVERYTHING OUT NOOO. i wanted to hit jaebum when all he asked was about jackson thinking he was handsome. but so cool/calm/collected and how i would envision him in that situation WHY ARE YOU SO GOOD AT THIS? but favorite thing was jackson telling jaebum he could round down his love. GET OUT LMAO
AND I'M STILL SO *___* AT THE SCENE WHEN THEY GET BACK (unf ofc you like being pushed around jackson lol). jackson just climbed into that lap like he belongs there (and he does). kiss forever. jb get jackson on the bed and control everything and make jackson keep it slow and drive him crazy... sorry i got sidetracked.
but i liked this so much. and not just because i love you and this otp. it was just a good read and i read it twice already. can i kiss your face? *___*
p.s. totally anticipating all future jackbum fic and PORN 💕
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really i just want to scream incoherently at you rn because this is so great and lerfect. and omg i've never commented on anything of yours before so please brace yourself (because i ramble and talk in runon sentences and it's horrible). wow where to start??? ok your jackson voice is so superb and on point. half the tine i was reading his lines and could hear his voice in my head. and yeah your love for him really shines through in your writing :3 but you made him so much fun to read and ugh ugh. jackson wang, light of my life. AND JAEBUM. he was so... jaebum. one of my favorite things was the line you included of jaebum helping yugyeom out of the van and i was just *__* leader im *__* and his struggle to find out jackson's crush and omg i was just /o\ at him thinking jackson liked someone (that wasn't his perfect ass) and trying to figure out and just ughhh yeah. BUT YOU GET THE JACKBUM?JAESON? (both suck) DYNAMIC SO GOOD AND ALL THE GOLD STARS FOR YOU!!!!! and zjslsjsl at things like jackson noticing jaebum's dark circles and jaebum trying so hard to get jackson to open up.
“That girl you were describing, she sounds a lot like -”
I SCREECHED LMAO. and everyone jumping into action so he wouldn't drop the secret and omg jaebum pls (did he just not fet bc he didn't think jackson would like /him/ or...????)
THEN ONLY IN A TOWEL JAEBUM GOING AFTER JACKSON LIKE NOOOOOOO. NIPPLES??? idk which is more unf, jackson distracted by that body or jaebum turning pink.
THE KINDA CONFESSION SCENE? JACKSON SAYING HE WANTS TO LICK THE GLOSS OFF JB'S LIPS LIKE YOOOOO. AND JACKSON BLURTING EVERYTHING OUT NOOO. i wanted to hit jaebum when all he asked was about jackson thinking he was handsome. but so cool/calm/collected and how i would envision him in that situation WHY ARE YOU SO GOOD AT THIS? but favorite thing was jackson telling jaebum he could round down his love. GET OUT LMAO
AND I'M STILL SO *___* AT THE SCENE WHEN THEY GET BACK (unf ofc you like being pushed around jackson lol). jackson just climbed into that lap like he belongs there (and he does). kiss forever. jb get jackson on the bed and control everything and make jackson keep it slow and drive him crazy... sorry i got sidetracked.
but i liked this so much. and not just because i love you and this otp. it was just a good read and i read it twice already. can i kiss your face? *___*
p.s. totally anticipating all future jackbum fic and PORN 💕