I liked the mood here, how you switched between the feelings Sutao had for each other and the eerie 'stuff is not right' and 'stuff is downright scary'. The way you expressed how Suho was unsettled and afraid was quite different from what I usually read. It was from an intelligent persons perspective who is trying to rationalize, which made it such an interesting read. Uh, I don't know how to say what I actually mean here but I felt that you weren't trying to be upfront about wanting to scare a reader but more like worm in the doubt. It worked! I had to search for a smut fic to calm my nerves after because I had the brilliant idea to read your fic already in bed at 2am, uhh. Glowing red eyes in the dark... ;~;

The Sutao was wonderful, or as wonderful it could be under these circumstances. I had a stupid grin on half of the time when reading, they really seemed to be very, very into each other. I almost wanted Suho to go back to him just so I wouldn't have to imagine the heartbreak that would await both of them. But it did make me wonder. In the end, how much of his soul did Tao exchange for Suho? His wants here circled around him quite a bit - pursuing him, getting him into EXO and then getting him out of there...

In the end, both Suho and Tao were very likable. Why did it have to be like this ;~; Why couldn't it have been a Disney movie ;~~~; Kyungsoo could have been an angel and slayed Yifan with his sword of light or something releasing everyone and we would have had a big dance number in the end, led by (also freed) dancing machine...


It was a very interesting read, I enjoyed it immensely.