http://playfulmelodies.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] playfulmelodies.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] riots 2013-07-22 12:30 am (UTC)

He's not alone. In the shadows around him, Joonmyun can make out the forms of the rest of EXO, their outlines blurring into the shadows of the street. After a second, they fade away, just leaving Zitao and his eyes, glowing red in the dark.

okay okay okay


okay so i'm not familiar with secret society at all so i was a bit confused coming into this?? like i didn't know what i was expecting but it certainly wasn't this masterpiece oh my god the first time I read this i was just like hoLY CRAP WHAT JUST HAPPENED BECAUSE I DONT THINK I CAN REMEMBER HOW TO FUNCTION?? FUNCTION WHAT IS THAT

all the little things that you put in there with lu han and yixing were just so cute and it kind of shows that they're human still even though part of their soul is gone and the baking scene with yifan ;___; he actually wasn't terrifying and that was nice C: i feel like other than zitao, lu han and yixing were the most humane (??) ones i mean like lu han is terrifying sometimes but luhan and yixing together is okay c: and then jongdae wow little fucker like i want to like him but he's just such a prick and i just ugh ;__; and minseok there wasn't much about him but i mean he doesn't seem totally monstrous (??)

and then yifan oh my god he scared me so much it was terrifying like at first with the whole thing with baekhyun that was sweet and awwwhhh and etc but then later when yixing+lu han aren't around he litterally scared the living shit out of me like i kept thinking that he was going to lash out of junmyeon or something crazy but of course zitao is there to defend him so i guess i shouldn't have been so worried.

and oh my god zitao zitao was just such a perfect combination he's mysterious but he's also loving and sweet but at the same time intimidating and he gets what he wants but he doesn't get junmyeon and that is just ;__; and i honestly don't think zitao is a bad person he's just lost and he thinks that the only way he'll be able to do anything is by being part of EXO and i would assume after a while it's impossible to leave and even if he left for junmyeon like there would be nothing left for him??

and junmyeon oh my god my perfect boy i love you so very much let me love you and wrap you up in a big fluffy blanket and kiss you on the nose and make you tea and whatever else you could possible want because you are so very precious ;__; i love how you wrote his decision to leave exo because obviously it's a big deal with the whole soul thing and he's just a decent person through and through and it's really just a shame that professors acted coldly towards him after he left exo ;__; and kyungsoo is just a marvelous friend just perfect he's the voice of reason that junmyeon doesn't want to listen to at first but then later realizes that kyungsoo had been right and maybe he should have been more careful. and chanyeol is precious too ofc and sehun and jongin omg brats <3 and baekhyun was adorable too ofc he would catch the eye of the most powerful man in EXO he's perfectly gorgeous ;__;

okay i didn't mean for this to get this long and incoherent but please accept my buckets of love for it this is like all i've ever wanted in life up until now i didn't know until i read it this is just flawless and perfect and [insert all other synonyms] <3 <3 <3

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