http://seulpeo.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] seulpeo.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] riots 2013-03-29 08:56 am (UTC)

omfg this made my mostly bad very long day :'D

ive told you this before obviously but your himchan really is my favorite himchan ever. his voice is so strong and youre so great at capturing banter and himchans awful soft spot for jonguppie and of course the banghim is flawless and yongguk is a gentleman and cry. idk i love how the storyline fell into place and you didnt do the chronological timeline of the guys going to get wasted and then himchan waking up with a hangover but rather he had to go back and find out what happened - and we as readers find out along with him and you pulled off the flashback/narrative sections so well, i never got lost with what was going on. and ofc your sense of humor coming through in the voice ugh ive never been able to do that but you are kendra and you posted fic you are amazing banghim is great!!!

ALSO THE STARFISH THING SOB.

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