ahh this was so great!!!! i wasn't familiar with this verse at all, i only watched the my chemical romance videos now (i read it last night) but your world building was incredible (definitely the highlight for me) and i had no trouble reading this as a stand alone fic~

honestly one of my favourite parts was kris getting beat up every single time HAHAHA. i like a fallible hero, it was a good touch i feel ^^ also i was happy there was no character death, it was tense and exciting but didn't leave me torn apart which is always a plus ^^

i liked how the romance was acknowledged and a definite part of this but not the focus of the fic. the cameos were so suitable and fun~ and the characterisation and relationships within XO were fantastic - the way they operated together was believable and entertaining. i really enjoyed this fic, thank you!!