http://haneyon.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] haneyon.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] riots 2013-03-09 05:34 pm (UTC)

“Hold still,” Youngjae tells Himchan, slapping him upside the head. HOW MUCH DO I LOVE UMMACHAN ABUSE. .__.♥ they do it because they love him lol.

His whole jealousy thing with zelo was also frankly adorable, I mean like—the way he knows he's being unreasonable but can't help it. And Yongguk calls him out in confusion BUT ONLY MOMENTARY CONFUSION because they don't have to say things loool. Himchan knowingly taking the bait, and Himchan always looks after the kids, but it's Yongguk who looks after Himchan. /FLAILING, MY HEART. And it only takes a few words for Yongguk to talk Himchan down, because—just because.

I also just love Himchan and Youngjae being more similar than not, from cheating at cards to mothering people and snarking around (and also both getting shot and snarking at each other for it lmao)—like, even if it's not said outright, it's another little line showing how all the dots are clearly connected. ;3; AND ZELO'S WHOLE… steady under fire (or under himchan's close-quarters attention, which, you know, same thing maybe sometimes) even if he's still a kid and a little shy and laughs around jongup and puppies around Yongguk akjhkajkjjkkje. AND DAEHYUN'S IMPECCABLE TIMING. He's so like, casually sensible from the mothership lol.

THE HIRED HELP HAVE ALL THE ACCURACY OF STORMTROOPERS LMFAO /crying. But then of course things go to shit right at that moment. I just love how you wrote himchan's tone through everything in this, like. Determined, anticipating, accepting, realistic, unrepentant, ugh so cool. ;; He's not just all snark or mom, he's so much more.

“You're the better shot. I'll take the kid,” Himchan says. AGAIN WITH THE—the way he just so easily acknowledges the others' abilities, but also his own. ;3; lmfao, "I don't decide anything around here. Yongguk is the captain" my ass. But it's so precious how they instinctively divvy up the process and call shots that complement each others' decisions. Their evident level footing.♥

AND ALSO THE IMPROVISATION IS SWEET. Zelo "isn't as uncoordinated as he looks" lmfao, this giant dancer maknae. .__.♥ HIMCHAN THROWING THE GUN AND THEN ZELO WITH HIS SWORD JUST—it cracks me up, but it's also such a nice bonding moment?? TEAMWORK, KIDS. THIS IS HOW IT'S DONE.

And now I'm all sobface because Choi papa and zelo's heartbreaking voice. it's like, so much worse now that IRL he's made so clear how much his parents mean to him?? kajkjhakjhwefakjwefawe ;;;;;;;;;

And yet, Himchan pragmatic momchan again ;3; well, pragmatic about keeping his boys alive (I LOVE HOW IT'S STILL UNDER PRETENCE WITH ZELO " you have the money, right? That's important" like his argument with Youngjae earlier—he's definitely a lost cause, but entirely unwilling to give in so easily loool. Proud diva.)

Youngjae's gonna be so mad at him. this line also really struck me like, even if himchan's doing a suicide run he doesn't think of it that way necessarily? He knows he's being fucking nuts, but he's not fatalistic about it. It's just what has to be done. (And now all I can see is like, Himchan being a dumbfuck koala climbing on that hugeass dude in Idol Wrestling oh my god. BUT HIS HANDS.) YOU EVEN WRITE HAND-TO-HAND WELL KENDRA, I seriously can't with your action kjahkjwhefae

Dumb boys and their liquid courage. .___.♥ but omg frank, understanding banghim is the best. and i totally love everyone indulging their new pink baby giraffe, and kjfakjhawe MOST OF ALL HIMCHAN'S HAPPINESS JUST BEING THE SIMPLE THINGS. being alive. his boys being alive, and well-fed. it just ties back to the start, with the opening scene being 'home' so well, and ties everything together just perfectly aaaaah~ i love it. I CAN'T SAY TOO MANY TIMES HOW MUCH I LOVE IT.

;3;

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