http://aoichanyume.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] aoichanyume.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] riots 2013-05-05 07:00 pm (UTC)

this made me cry. and i think i know why. it is actually my romantic fantasy...the idea of travelling to different cities on a whim without really knowing anyone in that city and falling in love with someone eventually...like it is my biggest romantic fantasy. so you writing this just strikes a chord.

 i love how unexpected the ending was (even though you mentioned it being kaixing in your A/N). like idk if kai would stay or not..was yixing good enough to anchor him. i love how luhan let him go...and how they both knew what it really was between them...how luhan didnt begged him to stay. i love how chanyeol's naivety was portrayed here and i love how kai wasnt giving him false hope...how simple their r/ship was. i love how yifan was the one before the one...how he made kai feel and the push and pull of their relationship was...how yifan knows that really kai shouldnt stay even if they both felt like he shld in that moment. i love that moment of panic that kai felt on the plane...because it is so easy to fall into the trap of thinking someone is the one just because things are comfortable between the two of you. and of cos i love kaixing...how they met, how they did all the tourist-y things tgt, how they almost kissed but didnt...how they ended up kissing anyway...how much kai hesitated bc really you only hesitate bc you dont wanna hurt the other person...and to not want to hurt the other person means that you actually feel a lot more for the person...i love how they dont immediately know they are both dancers...lastly, i love the open-ending...because it felt like kai stayed and that they'd have their happily ever after but who knows what would happen when kai eventually needs to move back or if yixing moved to seoul with him...there is still so much to ponder about their relationship. but kai finding a reason to stay, warms my heart <3

PS: sorry for the word vomit. this is shall now be my fav fic from you. 

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