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k ([personal profile] riots) wrote2012-12-12 12:29 am

fic advent: day six

for [livejournal.com profile] g_odalisque13
baekhyun/tao
r for dicks, 630 words
"Finding ways to shamelessly flirt even when they are in different countries"



Baekhyun's eyes widen when he sees the picture that Zitao's sent him and he slaps his phone facedown against his leg. He does his best to keep his composure, even though Chanyeol is eyeing him curiously from the chair next to him. Feigning nonchalance, Baekhyun waits until Chanyeol shifts his attention away and he's laughing at whatever game Sehun and Jongin are playing. It seems to involve a lot of punching. It always involves a lot of punching.

Casually, so casually, Baekhyun turns his phone over again. This time he's prepared, but that doesn't stop him from inhaling sharply. He's glad he's not quick to blush, because this would probably be the kind of situation that calls for it.

The night before EXO-M left for China, Baekhyun and Zitao had spent the night in Zitao's room, watching movies on Yifan's laptop. When he'd toyed with Zitao's fingers and joked that Zitao should send him naked pictures if he missed him, Baekhyun had never expected he actually...would.

And yet somehow, he's sitting backstage with a picture of Zitao on his phone that is definitely incriminating. He knows it's dumb to even be looking at this right now, but he can't tear his eyes away from the sharp lines of Zitao's hips and the way the waistband of his boxer briefs stretch across them. The best part, of course, is what's below that: the outline of Zitao's cock, hard and pushing against the fabric of his briefs.

Baekhyun stares at his phone until he's pretty sure the image is ingrained in his brain. He shifts a little in his seat and clears his throat and not for the first time, he wishes that China weren't so far away.

“What're you looking at?” Chanyeol's deep voice startles Baekhyun out of his revery and he reflexively flicks the screen off. Thank god for his quick reaction time.

“A text from your mother,” Baekhyun says smoothly. “She just wanted to thank me for a very, very good night.”

Chanyeol squawks in mock outrage as he swings at Baekhyun, no force behind it. “My mother is a saint,” he protests, shoving Baekhyun's shoulders so he rocks in his chair.

Baekhyun laughs, tucking his phone into his pocket, pleased at the way it's forgotten as Chanyeol plays along. The picture hasn't left his mind, though. Even as he's slapping Chanyeol's hands away, there's a part of him that wants to know what it feels like, to trace his thumbs down Zitao's hipbones.

When Chanyeol catches his eye again, Baekhyun can see he's curious, but Baekhyun just shakes his head. He's sure Chanyeol will wiggle it out of him, at night, when they're in their room, but now isn't the time or place. Especially not when he feels his phone vibrating and announcing the arrival of another text message.

This is safer. hyung? says the first one. i'm sorry, says the next. Baekhyun looks up quickly. The PD is waving at Joonmyun, flashing an outstretched hand to tell them they've got five minutes. He's got a second.

why? I'm not.

“Someone looks pretty pleased with himself,” Sehun says suspiciously.

Baekhyun grins at him, and he doesn't even mind when Sehun's eyes narrow even further. “Oh, you've got no idea,” he agrees. Joonmyun has his leader face on, the one that says 'phone away, Baekhyun', but Baekhyun isn't ready for that yet. i hope that's a promise for when you're back. He pauses, then adds: or tonight. Pressing send sets a thrill racing up his spine and he can't hold back his smile.

Two weeks until EXO-M is back in Korea. He's got the feeling that he and Zitao can figure out a very pleasant way to pass the time.


[identity profile] one-if-by-land.livejournal.com 2012-12-12 06:10 am (UTC)(link)
I'M SO GLAD YOU PULLED THROUGH because flirty baektao, omg. of course if anyone would risk a dirty photo via text, it'd be tao, and of course baekhyun is the type of sly hyung to encourage that behavior. >:) I really like the attention you put into filling out a scene? the joking with chanyeol, the PD waving to joonmyun, sehun's suspicions. they're all such boys. ♥

[personal profile] natsudive 2012-12-12 06:31 am (UTC)(link)
good job at making baektao work for you! i really liked this a lot! i have a theory that tao takes nude pictures of himself. he just seems like the type... xP

[identity profile] g-odalisque13.livejournal.com 2012-12-12 06:42 am (UTC)(link)
kjfdnjsfkdngbjdfn oh my god this was perfect
given that tao takes and endless number of selcas, naked selcas seem like the next natural step XD
and i can totally imagine baekhyun joking that tao should send him naked photos, even if he never thought that tao would take him seriously
just how he reacted to getting the text- hiding it, then bringing it back out to stare at it, hiding it again, and then realizing that he should probably respond- seems like a pretty natural response to me!
it was just perfect and way too realistic. from now on, i am going to assume that things like this happen XD
thank you so much for writing this!
added to memories and my exo fic rec :)

[identity profile] samstrident.livejournal.com 2012-12-12 07:31 am (UTC)(link)
!!!!

I know you were having trouble with this, but I really enjoyed it. It's really hot without being porn; both the description of the picture and Baekhyun being pleased with himself, excited and planning.

And for all that he's technically not there, you've done a great job of capturing Tao, and that's really not easy in the kind of space you're working with. From the fact that he takes Baekhyun up on the 'joke' to immediately regretting it and second-guessing himself, I just felt immediately comfortable in that characterization. I liked your Baekhyun too (and the awareness that eventually he will tell Chanyeol), but your Tao just really stuck with me. This was fantastic, sunshine, and you're making progress! keep on powering through ♥

[identity profile] airplanewishes.livejournal.com 2012-12-12 08:00 am (UTC)(link)
Omg Kendra! Just... I've been having all these BaekTao feels yesterday and then you write this. I want to roll around in the giddiness that this is giving me. This is really, really lovely AND hot. Let me hug you! ♥

[identity profile] loudestoflove.livejournal.com 2012-12-12 01:07 pm (UTC)(link)
tao the selca king!! thank you so much!! i think i may actually be pleased with how it turned out hahaha

[identity profile] loudestoflove.livejournal.com 2012-12-12 01:08 pm (UTC)(link)
i bet he only sends them to other people after taking forty to make sure he's got the best lighting and angle. lmao thank you so much!! ♥

[identity profile] loudestoflove.livejournal.com 2012-12-12 01:10 pm (UTC)(link)
thank you so much!! i was really struggling with it, i've never really written either of them and i don't really stan them so i was like what do i doooo but i'm really pleased that you liked it!! haha tbh i hope this isn't canon just bc i feel like it could end badly if there are stolen/hacked phones. thank YOU so much for reading!!

[identity profile] loudestoflove.livejournal.com 2012-12-12 01:13 pm (UTC)(link)
thank youuuuu. should i be worried that i seem to write teenage boys with ease?? lmao ♥ i think the next few will go faster for me, so here's hoping!! thank you so much bb

[identity profile] loudestoflove.livejournal.com 2012-12-12 01:13 pm (UTC)(link)
hahaha thank you!! i'm always glad to contribute to feels and hugs are always appreciated ♥

[identity profile] seulpeo.livejournal.com 2012-12-13 02:31 am (UTC)(link)
gurgles quietly and admires zitaos hipbones
this was lovely huhu i love all of your advent fics ;3333;

[identity profile] loudestoflove.livejournal.com 2012-12-14 04:12 am (UTC)(link)
thank youuuuuu ♥

[identity profile] tyreling.livejournal.com 2012-12-14 05:39 am (UTC)(link)
asdfghjkl beef couple! omg this is so amazing. asdfjk

[identity profile] hipployta.livejournal.com 2012-12-14 06:08 am (UTC)(link)
WERK!!! Get it Tao...and GET THAT BAEKHYUN! You knew what you were doing when you put that thought in his head...OWWW

[identity profile] evilblea.livejournal.com 2012-12-14 03:34 pm (UTC)(link)
Ugly sobbing!! Beef couple is too cute too!!!

[identity profile] charliebnim.livejournal.com 2012-12-14 04:59 pm (UTC)(link)
i love baektao!! wish you could continue thisssss

[identity profile] mangafanxd.livejournal.com 2012-12-14 09:37 pm (UTC)(link)
baektao yesss. lol at baekhyun. and tao. :p

“A text from your mother,” Baekhyun says smoothly. “She just wanted to thank me for a very, very good night.”

[identity profile] loudestoflove.livejournal.com 2012-12-15 12:09 am (UTC)(link)
they're so cute. thank you!!

[identity profile] loudestoflove.livejournal.com 2012-12-15 12:10 am (UTC)(link)
tao knows what he wants!! hahaha thank you!!

[identity profile] loudestoflove.livejournal.com 2012-12-15 12:12 am (UTC)(link)
agreed!! thank you for reading!!

[identity profile] loudestoflove.livejournal.com 2012-12-15 12:13 am (UTC)(link)
well, thank you!! it's just meant to be a drabble, though, i find it difficult to write these two. thank you!!

[identity profile] loudestoflove.livejournal.com 2012-12-15 12:14 am (UTC)(link)
when you write enough fic about teenage boys, eventually a 'your mom' joke has to make it in there somewhere. thank you for reading!!

[identity profile] mangafanxd.livejournal.com 2012-12-15 12:22 am (UTC)(link)
lol you're welcome~

idk if you noticed but I commented on all these drabbles, and you replied to every single one...

annoying reader feels glad.

by the way...what's your nameeee?

[identity profile] loudestoflove.livejournal.com 2012-12-15 12:38 am (UTC)(link)
of course!! i answer all my comments, i appreciate every one. i'm kendra, what's your name??

[identity profile] mangafanxd.livejournal.com 2012-12-15 12:42 am (UTC)(link)
hellooo~ I'm mel, nice to meet you!

[identity profile] loudestoflove.livejournal.com 2012-12-15 04:09 am (UTC)(link)
nice to meet you too! :)

[identity profile] frailspells.livejournal.com 2012-12-15 08:09 am (UTC)(link)
screams repeatedly and cries

i love your tao, and both his boldness in sending the picture and then the apology afterwards because of course he second-guesses himself and probably panics? ugh babies. ♥

[identity profile] loudestoflove.livejournal.com 2012-12-16 08:15 am (UTC)(link)
thank you!! that means a lot to me bc i am so not comfortable writing him ♥

[identity profile] mangafanxd.livejournal.com 2012-12-17 04:58 pm (UTC)(link)
ah, i've added you as a friend, hope you don't mind?

[identity profile] loudestoflove.livejournal.com 2012-12-24 04:42 am (UTC)(link)
of course not, you are more than welcome to!! this journal is for fic though, i don't have a personal one

[identity profile] acornmama.livejournal.com 2012-12-31 07:18 am (UTC)(link)
Never thought of the two of them together but oh yeah they are adorable. You make them all work!

[identity profile] loudestoflove.livejournal.com 2013-01-01 07:06 pm (UTC)(link)
they're actually very close!! both of them are taurus and tao gave baekhyun a necklace a while back that baekhyun is way fond of. but thank you so much!!

[identity profile] squares (from livejournal.com) 2013-01-27 03:15 am (UTC)(link)
OH! This fic is such a tease! I like that you took such a small moment and made it something that speaks volumes to the story between the two that has and will happen. It's really sexy without being over the top. I like it!

[identity profile] loudestoflove.livejournal.com 2013-01-28 04:00 am (UTC)(link)
i was really iffy on writing this bc i'm not sure i have a good grasp on either of them but thank you so much!! i really appreciate this